For writing we had to write a descriptive story about our bedrooms. We were learning how to describe using see, hear, smell, taste and feel. I found it challenging to describe what I could hear, smell and taste. Next time I would add more paragraphs to my writing.
My cool Bedrood
My favorite part of my bedroom is having my ion PS4, because then I don't have to share with my brothen. I have a super king bed in the middle of my room. You can find me playing my PS4 all the time. My room is super clean. I tidy it all the time and I don't leave clothes lying around. It feels warm in the morning because I have my heater on. I like it because it is the second biggest room in the house.
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